Our theme for this Haiku Monday is pathways. A tough assignment from One Deep Breath! Here is my entry this week:
forest pathway strewn
with hail beckons
through the trees...
They say you can break the rules (5-7-5, or 17 syllables, or...), but this may have gone too far! See today's other post for more photos of Friday's unconventional weather.
So here's a more conventional haiku, following up on last week's assignment:
blessings on the land
in a healthy quenching rain:
Earth sighs in relief.
8 comments:
Two wonderful Haiku's and the photo is splendid. The rest of your photo's are remarkable; winter's crispness in June.
both are wonderful haikus! such an inviting trail too.
I like the 5-4-3 pattern. It's like an upsidedown word triangle. Nicely done and both are lovely. I can hear the rumbling sigh of the earth.
Gorgeous! Another pathway:
Change follows lightning
Rivulets dry in the sun
meandering trails
convention...schmention...they both create beautiful visions :-)
thanks for joining us again!
Hmmm - perhaps the lovely and talented Cat Lady would like to post her entries in our comments at One Deep Breath? More talent is always welcome. You don't have to have a blog :)
I'm a forest nut and I loved the photo. "Earth sighs in relief" was brilliant!
you have caught the essence of the storm - well done
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